Haiku's: A new life and Wishes


Carpe Diem #722 buried in moss



When I read this wonderful episode, two images dominated my mind. The first one was of moss covered letters and the second was of moss covered rocks at the bottom of a pond. Here are two Haiku's based on these images.

A new life

Under pink blossoms
Holding moss covered letters
Posing for flashes


Wishes

Rocks covered in moss
Bottom of the temple pond
Hide wishes in coins

I am eternally grateful to Chèvrefeuille for the daily Haiku prompts at 

Comments

  1. The moss-covered rocks draw my attention. I wouldn't mind sitting on their cushioned surface!

    No Moss

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    1. Ah! Thank you so much! Your take was very deep and thought provoking!!

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  2. Temple ponds probably hold a lot more things than coins...some hidden wisdom, for instance.

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    1. Very true. You've just inspired me to write something on those lines. Thank you!!!

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  3. Both are really great Vyomi, but your second haiku is very strong and very spiritually layered.

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    1. Thank you so much! I'm really glad you thought so! I'm humbled!

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