Haiku: Autumn winds

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Wisps of red flutter
Myriad patterns spiral
Soft crunches echo

I am eternally grateful to Chèvrefeuille for the daily Haiku prompts at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. 




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  1. UnknownMay 25, 2015 at 12:19 AM

    wonderful sounds flutter through this haiku

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  2. UnknownMay 25, 2015 at 12:26 AM

    Thank you so much! That's really very kind of you!!!

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleMay 25, 2015 at 7:35 AM

    I am in awe Vyomi ... this haiku makes me silent and eager to listen to the flutters and crunches echo ...

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    1. UnknownMay 25, 2015 at 1:17 PM

      Thank you ever so much Kristjaan, I'm really humbled. You are too kind. :-) :-) :-)

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  4. AnonymousMay 25, 2015 at 10:57 PM

    Beautiful Vyomi! Love the 'echo' bit here...and the pic is awesome! :)

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    1. UnknownMay 25, 2015 at 11:28 PM

      Thank you so much!!! The PIC is all thanks to our host Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All credit to him for the daily inspiration!!!! :-) :-) :-)

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  5. Bastet's Waka LibraryMay 26, 2015 at 10:43 AM

    Lovely :-)

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    1. UnknownMay 27, 2015 at 2:21 PM

      Thank you so much for your kind words Georgia!!

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  6. Blog It Or Lose ItMay 26, 2015 at 12:06 PM

    The crunching echoes -- quite an interesting sound-image :)

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    1. UnknownMay 27, 2015 at 2:22 PM

      Thank you ever so much for your kind words!!!

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  7. UnknownMay 26, 2015 at 10:56 PM

    Sound in haiku always works for me - very well done.

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    1. UnknownMay 27, 2015 at 2:23 PM

      Thank you ever so much for your kind words!!! I'm really happy you liked it!!! :-) :-) :-)

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  8. M S MahawarJune 5, 2015 at 4:37 PM

    Very Beautiful!

    Lovelorn Poetry

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