Haiku: Autumn winds





Wisps of red flutter
Myriad patterns spiral
Soft crunches echo

I am eternally grateful to Chèvrefeuille for the daily Haiku prompts at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai




Comments

  1. wonderful sounds flutter through this haiku

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  2. Thank you so much! That's really very kind of you!!!

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  3. I am in awe Vyomi ... this haiku makes me silent and eager to listen to the flutters and crunches echo ...

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    1. Thank you ever so much Kristjaan, I'm really humbled. You are too kind. :-) :-) :-)

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  4. Beautiful Vyomi! Love the 'echo' bit here...and the pic is awesome! :)

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    1. Thank you so much!!! The PIC is all thanks to our host Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. All credit to him for the daily inspiration!!!! :-) :-) :-)

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words Georgia!!

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  6. The crunching echoes -- quite an interesting sound-image :)

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    1. Thank you ever so much for your kind words!!!

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  7. Sound in haiku always works for me - very well done.

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    1. Thank you ever so much for your kind words!!! I'm really happy you liked it!!! :-) :-) :-)

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    1. Welcome here! Thank you ever so much!

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