Haiku: Flutter of Wings

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Carpe Diem #727 a butterfly flies

The first Haiku was inspired from the transformation of a caterpillar into a butterfly.  
The second, watching little  naughty children chase butterflies in a rose bush.


A burst of color
Joy bursting forth the cocoon
Dash of dancing wings
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Amidst the rose bush
Chasing a flutter of wings
Thorns prick little hands

Comments

  1. AnonymousMay 12, 2015 at 11:25 PM

    beautiful lines...

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  2. sunaina sharmaMay 12, 2015 at 11:59 PM

    nice.....

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  3. Sreedhar BhattaramMay 13, 2015 at 8:28 AM

    Well said....

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleMay 15, 2015 at 8:09 PM

    Both are gorgeous, but your last haiku was really moving/emotionally seen

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    1. UnknownMay 15, 2015 at 11:41 PM

      I'm really humbled... Thank you ever so much for your feedback and appreciation. I eagerly wait for your thoughts on my Haiku's.

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