Being Alive!
With great trepidation I'm taking part in the daily Haiku challenge posted on Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. The challenge is to distill this wonderful poem into a Haiku.
In this CD Tokubetsudesu episode Paloma wants to challenge you all to distill haiku from a poem by N.Scott Momaday.
Credits: N. Scott Momaday (1934 -) |
Momaday is considered the founding author in what critic Kenneth Lincoln has termed the Native American Renaissance.
“House Made of Dawn” is considered a classic in Native American Literature. (More about Momaday you can find by following the link under the photo).
Here is the poem which is chosen by Paloma of Blog It Or Lose It to distill a (or more) haiku from. It's a gorgeous poem, as I may say so, and I think it can inspire you a lot. It's a challenge of course to catch the essence of the poem in a haiku (or few), but it is also a way to look at haiku built from a longer poem ...
The Delight Song of Tsoai-talee
I am a feather on the bright sky
I am the blue horse that runs in the plain
I am the fish that rolls, shining, in the water
I am the shadow that follows a child
I am the evening light, the lustre of meadows
I am an eagle playing with the wind
I am a cluster of bright beads
I am the farthest star
I am the cold of dawn
I am the roaring of the rain
I am the glitter on the crust of the snow
I am the long track of the moon in a lake
I am a flame of four colors
I am a deer standing away in the dusk
I am a field of sumac and the pomme blanche
I am an angle of geese in the winter sky
I am the hunger of a young wolf
I am the whole dream of these things
You see, I am alive, I am alive
I stand in good relation to the earth
I stand in good relation to the gods
I stand in good relation to all that is beautiful
I stand in good relation to the daughter of Tsen-tainte
You see, I am alive, I am alive
My Haiku for the prompt is below:
Omniscient good,
Greatness of being alive,
A blessed joyous life!
I have also super imposed this on an image I clicked ages ago.
I'm calling this Haiga- "Being Alive!"
Being Alive- A Haiga |
lovely :-)
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ReplyDeleteThank you so much Janice. I'm really happy you liked it.
DeleteI agree: It's great to be alive!
ReplyDeleteYes! Cheers to a wonderful life!
DeleteWhat a beautiful haiga!
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DeleteThis haiga is excellent, an awesome photo and the haiku fits it so well.
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